summed on the brink
fetching...
purchasing??
an arrival
jolting for the potrayal
cut on to be sent
as??
a fuse...
when on paper it crack
23 october 2007
fetching...
purchasing??
an arrival
jolting for the potrayal
cut on to be sent
as??
a fuse...
when on paper it crack
23 october 2007
Thoughts... wanting to come out on paper...
ReplyDeletebut not finding the right words... so they are cracked???
sorry...
a few interpretations in random order
(1)
summed on the brink
fetching...
purchasing??
an arrival
on the deathbed after evaluation....summed up on brink
trying to purchase life....arrival
jolting for the potrayal
cut on to be sent
as??
trying to still stick to d potrayal
maybe will hav to b cut
as wat.....maybe watever.....but want life back in any form
a fuse...
maybe a fusion of types
when on paper it crack
wen actually tried to sketch
it cud not happen
coz death cud not purchase life at ny cost
24/10/2007
Anonymous
summed on the brink
fetching...
purchasing??
an arrival
pushed on the edge
trying to purchase limelight
get the center stage......arrival
jolting for the potrayal
cut on to be sent
as??
trying to be known, famous
mayb by altering myself
famous as watever,,,,,,but b in the mid
a fuse...
even as a camouflage
when on paper it crack
wen tried to sketch
i pressed so hard
the lead cracked
n so did my image
24/10/2007
Anonymous
3rd explanation
summed on the brink
fetching...
purchasing??
an arrival
jolting for the potrayal
cut on to be sent
as??
a fuse...
when on paper it crack
as luneeka said
thoughts summed up trying to come on paper
jolting for a structure a medium
as a poem, a prose, a lesson
now modified to b ritten
as a deeply fused version
but couldnot occur....crack
summed on the brink
fetching...
purchasing??
an arrival
jolting for the potrayal
cut on to be sent
as??
a fuse...
when on paper it crack
My interp:
A long held tear drop atlast falling and cracking on a white paper! (white is my sense :))
I really love reading you. poetry needn't communicate to everyone :). emotions needs to be awaken by the spirit of the readers senses and I believe thats what any art is all about. Else poetry reduces to just jugglery of words and grammar.