Thursday, July 14, 2011

Moon in Flames III (series)

Tomorrow: sun falling on a dust clad road
Yesterday: heavy gray clouds making a distant sound
Today: the rains

I have come too far ahead
to remember how it felt, the movement of days
I remember vaguely how I looked at the sky on a winter night
how in the moon, I found flames.

Shringi
July 14, 2011

2 comments:

  1. Lovely. Last line is breathtaking.

    So very rarely I have found one using flames in moon. The whole contrast does two things - gets moon out of softness or puts flame into a lot of warmth without the burn.

    Good for life, both.

    Lovely write.

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  2. I relate to this so much and i couldnt have put it in a better way

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